033: Revised Tactics

Jun 21 2007 03:00 pm

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Author's Comments:

XeaRi,

033: Revised Tactics Lack of text here. Yay! And Leanael's using her head. Also yay! In the fourth panel, I wanted to show the symbol on her hand flashing into view for a split second (see, it's not in the next panel). It's hard to show a flash of not-light.
More colour! See, different colour, different type of "magic." Yep.
And suspense. I don't know if I'm that good at cliffhangers, but I think this one worked well. Oh, and I don't know if thock is the most appropriate onomatopoeia, but it works for me.

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Ghost the Echidna,

lovely art as always ^^

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